tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post115936071539609310..comments2023-11-03T09:34:33.742-04:00Comments on Elly's Fanfiction: Mortal Beloved, Chapter 1Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-26638807767208053522010-07-10T02:31:22.488-04:002010-07-10T02:31:22.488-04:00It's been years since I read this, and it'...It's been years since I read this, and it's just as beautiful today as it was then. I love the way you bring these two to life, Elly!DeeDeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14277884826087371975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-15874784277266110032008-12-30T06:20:00.000-05:002008-12-30T06:20:00.000-05:00Now THIS is the way it SHOULD have gone down! I r...Now THIS is the way it SHOULD have gone down! I really like the way you describe Clark's reactions to pain. He's a big ol' wuss, he is!<BR/><BR/>Awesome start, Elly. I am so looking forward to the next chapter!<BR/><BR/>Regards,<BR/>Dee.DeeDeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14277884826087371975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-46523799264455453692007-12-02T17:09:00.000-05:002007-12-02T17:09:00.000-05:00LOL. aww it's so cute how he's going all "macho pr...LOL. aww it's so cute how he's going all "macho pride" when he says he got two hits in :D. aww he's with Lana :grr: but it's cute how he grabs her in a hug ^_^. ooh bedroom voice ;]. WOOT! HEATED end to the chapter Elly :)blackheart_mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11131749609048779621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-9009294518080580042007-01-03T20:47:00.000-05:002007-01-03T20:47:00.000-05:00i just started reading this and i tell you, i'm li...i just started reading this and i tell you, i'm liking it already.<br /><br />very sweet....i like it when clark is being more bold than usual, especially when it comes to chloe.<br /><br />i want to go to the next chapter now so..... =)!<br /><br />joanna - kidkarminaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-1159906263263981292006-10-03T16:11:00.000-04:002006-10-03T16:11:00.000-04:00*fans self*Boy-o-boy...can tell i'm gonna like thi...*fans self*<BR/><BR/>Boy-o-boy...can tell i'm gonna like this already!!! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-1159408627848328012006-09-27T21:57:00.000-04:002006-09-27T21:57:00.000-04:00this is sooo much better than the episodethank you...this is sooo much better than the episode<BR/><BR/>thank you for wrwiting it !<BR/><BR/>simoneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-1159375998136013292006-09-27T12:53:00.000-04:002006-09-27T12:53:00.000-04:00Wow!!!! I need a fan!!! I mean I have no idea why ...Wow!!!! I need a fan!!! I mean I have no idea why this feel so hot but it does!!! They are so cute together!!! Thanks for starting another wonderful story ;), hugs!! Be well and take care.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com