tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post2118321296461798816..comments2023-11-03T09:34:33.742-04:00Comments on Elly's Fanfiction: You're My Angel, Chapter 2Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-42665266368681379542008-02-08T21:25:00.000-05:002008-02-08T21:25:00.000-05:00"Oh, I see. That's very..." She wiggled against hi..."Oh, I see. That's very..." She wiggled against him and grinned evilly. "Big of you, Clark."-----LOL!!!!!<BR/><BR/>I loved that line Elly! This is how the real "Exposed" episode should have went! Get some hot n sexy angelic Chloe instead of the All-American Lois! The Chloe you give us is much much much hotter! Why can't you write for Smallville? Arrrggggggghhhhhh!!! Their writers need some serious tutoring Elly... you need to help'em out! Wish you really could! Anyway, the show sucks, but I take solace in the knowing that I can come here and get a little satisfying release from my anguish from watching the actual show. Thanks, Elly!!!! Okay.... on to the next chapter.....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-14502130954594298352007-12-05T16:00:00.000-05:002007-12-05T16:00:00.000-05:00I love the picture at the begging of this chapter....I love the picture at the begging of this chapter. So freakin funny!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks EllyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-10422964355275697702007-10-03T22:11:00.000-04:002007-10-03T22:11:00.000-04:00Before I move on I have to comment on just how bri...Before I move on I have to comment on just how brilliant this chapter is. All of Clark's reactions? Beautiful. Chloe faltering when she sees him? Lovely. His reaction to her and her teasing him? Sexy as hell. Protective Clark? Fantastic. <BR/><BR/>You're so damn good it hurts.MK Piatkowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03121227101455959849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-70394634154394681022007-10-02T17:56:00.000-04:002007-10-02T17:56:00.000-04:00I agree that picture is HILARIOUS & adorable at th...I agree that picture is HILARIOUS & adorable at the same time! I love his reaction to her teasing...& how she caught him. It's like "OH!" This is such a good break from that episode. I'd watch this anytime and especially if it's written by you! Deff. my fave line here right now: "At least he'd die happy."<BR/>Okay I take it back, I can't possibly copy and paste all my favorite lines, ur writing is just so good. I love how he gets all possesive =]<BR/>OMG HE GOT CAUGHT! lol! gotta go read chap 3!blackheart_mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11131749609048779621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-76772742987160926932007-06-27T03:11:00.000-04:002007-06-27T03:11:00.000-04:00oh soo goodoh soo goodAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-63844631548087858292007-06-21T22:37:00.000-04:002007-06-21T22:37:00.000-04:00gah! You seriously need to continue this. I forgot...gah! You seriously need to continue this. I forgot it wasn't finished D: I'm hoping for some chlarky lovin in the near future ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-31736026436955895282007-06-18T09:58:00.000-04:002007-06-18T09:58:00.000-04:00Loving your take on 'Exposed'!LaineLoving your take on 'Exposed'!<BR/><BR/>LaineAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-1091194383867895342007-05-29T18:08:00.000-04:002007-05-29T18:08:00.000-04:00Now THIS is the way the episode should have gone! ...Now THIS is the way the episode should have gone! Elly, you have a natural talent for writing, and if the show had writers half as good as you, they would have a much larger fanbase. I'm a Chlarker myself, and your stories have made my day!!!<BR/><BR/>Looking forward to the rest!!!<BR/>DeeDee.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-21006145090776938752007-02-11T23:50:00.000-05:002007-02-11T23:50:00.000-05:00WOW!This is awesomePlz continue soonWOW!<BR/>This is awesome<BR/>Plz continue soonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-83455596641619350522007-01-22T01:00:00.000-05:002007-01-22T01:00:00.000-05:00Wow Elly, Very Hot!!!!!! Hanging on the edge of my...Wow Elly, Very Hot!!!!!! Hanging on the edge of my seat, LOL!!!! And like I said before, I LOVE this story, and your version of the episode!!!! I Can't Wait to read more of this!!!!!! Please update as soon as possible, Thanks!!!! Again Awesome work, and Take Care!!!!! AmberAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-9099817689189709242007-01-18T23:45:00.000-05:002007-01-18T23:45:00.000-05:00i really like your perspective on this episode tha...i really like your perspective on this episode than the actual / "real" episode on the show.<br /><br />much, much better, i tell you =)! hope you'll post more soon!!!<br /><br />thanks,<br />joannaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-61325994213299373412007-01-18T19:28:00.000-05:002007-01-18T19:28:00.000-05:00This is so much better than the real episode!!! T...This is so much better than the real episode!!! This is by far one of your best stories ever! <br />-Amber-Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com