tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post4415375962675130808..comments2023-11-03T09:34:33.742-04:00Comments on Elly's Fanfiction: Crashed, Chapter 4Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-1442626389340752742007-11-12T22:37:00.000-05:002007-11-12T22:37:00.000-05:00LOL! It cracks me up that when he tenses up, think...LOL! It cracks me up that when he tenses up, thinking, she actually moves against him to get him to stop. Very smart because then he's thinking with his other head, lol, but also very amusing. <B>"Goddamn it. He was doomed. Totally doomed. Those soft words stole away every ounce of common decency or morals he'd ever had."</B>ELLY u r just WOW. It is sad to think that ur best friend may go catatonic and never be able to talk to them...damn. Also the way u talk about him losing sight of Chloe's smile was so dearing, then when he tells her never to go away: that's just so heart warming such a sad/sweet moment. aww Elly u brought tears to my eyes re-writing the scene with her mom. It's so sad...I also love that u added him going to comfort her too. They missed that in the show, stupid writers :(blackheart_mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11131749609048779621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-18961180605441225352007-05-14T20:50:00.000-04:002007-05-14T20:50:00.000-04:00i...wow....ok...this is one of the first times i g...i...wow....ok...this is one of the first times i got misty eyed reading fan fiction....and i got goosebumps too. :)<BR/><BR/><BR/>megAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-69830406319083751702007-05-14T18:10:00.000-04:002007-05-14T18:10:00.000-04:00YESSSS!! Good god I have been waiting for an updat...YESSSS!! Good god I have been waiting for an update foreva! I think I'm going to cry its so beautiful, lmao ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-24806068427798627362007-05-14T16:03:00.000-04:002007-05-14T16:03:00.000-04:00Loved it Elly!When I was watching the ep. I wonder...Loved it Elly!<BR/>When I was watching the ep. I wondered how that scene would ho on. After Chkoe lost her mother again, I hope you continue with this scene.<BR/>great job, as always.<BR/><BR/>-x-<BR/>StephanieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com