tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post4998092849136082662..comments2023-11-03T09:34:33.742-04:00Comments on Elly's Fanfiction: Crashed, Chapter 2Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-77902459464647753762007-11-12T22:14:00.000-05:002007-11-12T22:14:00.000-05:00Elly I just love how u write it. Especially his de...Elly I just love how u write it. Especially his denial and curses toward Jimmy. It's Brilliant :)<BR/><B>"At the mention of Jimmy, a hot flood of emotion washed over him, tightening his chest and tensing all his muscles. It took him a minute to realize the feeling was jealousy. He suddenly remembered Moira's voice saying, You're in love with her, and an unreasoning anger lit in him."</B> It's hilarious how he keeps comparing himself with Jimmy without really meaning to but doing it. Hilarious ;). I kinda wish she would pull away from him when he's about to kiss her, mostly because it's been so long...but I love that he's so protective and that she is in fact comforting him. This was just beautiful cuz it's so true and I wish that they would point it out in the show instead of drift them apart: <B>"He hadn't thought of it that way, but he recognized the truth of the words. He and Chloe had always been close, but now they each had secrets to keep. Secrets they couldn't share with anyone except each other. It had brought them closer together than ever."</B>blackheart_mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11131749609048779621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-19425968122838643832007-05-02T00:59:00.000-04:002007-05-02T00:59:00.000-04:00I've probably read and enjoyed 90% of your stories...I've probably read and enjoyed 90% of your stories so far and this is the first one I've commented on. S6 has been so wonderful for the Chlark 'ship and you do such a great job picking up where the writers left off. Thanks so much and I can't wait to see how this one ends.<BR/><BR/>marikologyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-76773839702837996372007-04-30T11:56:00.000-04:002007-04-30T11:56:00.000-04:00I am loving this! Great work.I am loving this! Great work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-27927078951023384332007-04-30T11:24:00.000-04:002007-04-30T11:24:00.000-04:00*Squee!* For a while there, I didn't think we'd g...*Squee!* For a while there, I didn't think we'd get an Elly MHE for Progeny--so I'm happily surprised to see it. And true to form, you've delivered the goods by filling in the missing Chlark pieces. Great start Elly, I'm really looking forward to more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-91893247033733494992007-04-27T19:01:00.000-04:002007-04-27T19:01:00.000-04:00*squee!* Oh how I love this story :D*squee!* Oh how I love this story :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-46390617844303284132007-04-27T16:20:00.000-04:002007-04-27T16:20:00.000-04:00Another great chapter, Elly, and allow me to secon...Another great chapter, Elly, and allow me to second Meg's statement. Having said that, now that Clark has told Moira a little about his own abilities, you've just got to have him tell her about the fight with Brainiac in the Fortress. And while we're on the subject of Brainiac, I can't wait to see the next chapter of that story of yours in which Brainiac is a star. I think we can all agree that pretty much everything goes better with at least a little Brainiac.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-60535190397858848632007-04-27T14:01:00.000-04:002007-04-27T14:01:00.000-04:00ANNOUNCEMENT! ANOUNCEMENT! Someone PLEASE get Elly...ANNOUNCEMENT! ANOUNCEMENT! Someone PLEASE get Elly on the writing staff of Smallville STAT! ASAP!<BR/><BR/>THIS is the conversation I wanted to see in Progeny!....yes Clark, the two of you are different TOGETHER. you have a deep understanding of these two characters Elly...yet another good update<BR/><BR/>megAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-19691402199440942482007-04-27T13:17:00.000-04:002007-04-27T13:17:00.000-04:00Elly-Always LOVE the stories - and this one promis...Elly-<BR/><BR/>Always LOVE the stories - and this one promises not to disappoint. Thanks for all of your hard work!Lora Bellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11664602792847620987noreply@blogger.com