tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post5135085258212791567..comments2023-11-03T09:34:33.742-04:00Comments on Elly's Fanfiction: The Gift, Chapter 1Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-47988371927203702032009-10-26T15:30:45.069-04:002009-10-26T15:30:45.069-04:00It's amazing that Lois is always written bette...It's amazing that Lois is always written better in fanfic than she is on the actual show. <br /><br />I love this story so far. I don't know why Clark always takes people to task for lying, it's pretty much second nature to him. I giggled when he kept putting people's candles out with his blinks & sighs! <br /><br />Fantastic start. Can't wait to read the rest!<br /><br />Regards,<br />Dee.DeeDeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14277884826087371975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-72855000947492982009-10-20T22:53:20.112-04:002009-10-20T22:53:20.112-04:00Ahh, that Lois I can like and I could hear her voi...Ahh, that Lois I can like and I could hear her voice so perfectly in my head. That is the Lois that Smallville has written even if they are constantly trying to force it another way. Really looking forward to more. ---Loved the eyelash wind--BkWurm1https://www.blogger.com/profile/10381874782205137136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-60865881127818653202009-10-20T18:24:04.039-04:002009-10-20T18:24:04.039-04:00More Elly! More! LoL. How do you get all of these ...More Elly! More! LoL. How do you get all of these stories in your head and bring it out to such beautiful writing?<br /><br />I can picture it all in my head, too true to Clois, you write them perfectly. Loving how Lois is seeing it all clearly.<br /><br />Can't wait to see what's next! Please Post More Soon! :-]Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-2001731229469659512009-10-20T15:54:02.038-04:002009-10-20T15:54:02.038-04:00Wonderful story. I'm surprised that Lois does...Wonderful story. I'm surprised that Lois doesn't press for details on his special abilities, though.<br /><br />I look forward to the next chapter. Every time I see an update, I view it as a gift you give us!<br /><br />SarahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-55044121143863931062009-10-20T15:46:03.127-04:002009-10-20T15:46:03.127-04:00Where does the line form to beg for more?
Fantast...Where does the line form to beg for more?<br /><br />Fantastic work, and I love your Lois and Clark interaction, here. She comes off as so adult and self-aware.Tonyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02457883390207815687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-63411878839293563852009-10-20T15:09:25.602-04:002009-10-20T15:09:25.602-04:00I *gasp* like your Lois Elly, You reflected a very...I *gasp* like your Lois Elly, You reflected a very season 4 Lois which i really liked because she wasn't that abrasive at the time. I'm very intrigued in the direction of the next chapter.<br /><br />ppms!chloista4everhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11302283163911229292noreply@blogger.com