tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post7030356260761559534..comments2023-11-03T09:34:33.742-04:00Comments on Elly's Fanfiction: First KissUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-63941739137463344672011-04-16T15:40:38.420-04:002011-04-16T15:40:38.420-04:00Re-read this... brilliant. I'd love to see a f...Re-read this... brilliant. I'd love to see a follow-up eventually. :DRJChasezhttp://rjchasez.livejournal.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-42052318605167314232009-02-07T13:22:00.000-05:002009-02-07T13:22:00.000-05:00I love how much smarter she is in a short time tha...I love how much smarter she is in a short time than Nois :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-20297184070727692172009-02-06T10:36:00.000-05:002009-02-06T10:36:00.000-05:00This is even better (if that's possible) than your...This is even better (if that's possible) than your usual stellar pieces! I hope you continue the story!<BR/><BR/>SarahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-58214155086416964672009-02-03T13:36:00.000-05:002009-02-03T13:36:00.000-05:00Wonderful! You've taken the comic-book canon and ...Wonderful! You've taken the comic-book canon and aligned it perfectly with the "Smallville" mythos. I'm really interested in where you're taking this, and I hope you write some sequels. Where you ended it just cries out for more. <BR/>Sincerely, IolantheAliasAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-56207636311658055442009-02-03T01:09:00.000-05:002009-02-03T01:09:00.000-05:00This story is really engrossing, I hated to reach ...This story is really engrossing, I hated to reach the end. I hope you might feel inspired to continue, maybe first dance,first fight, first night, first cup of coco by the fire, I'm not picky and there are so many possibilities.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-70595544737087909732009-02-02T10:57:00.000-05:002009-02-02T10:57:00.000-05:00Oh Elly, this is really good. I am fantasizing tha...Oh Elly, this is really good. I am fantasizing that you will stretch this out for many, many delicious chapters so I can savor each one for a long time! Thank you for picking up on this one again. :-)AnalogAmyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00892800137209987212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-5465218046846901972009-02-02T04:31:00.000-05:002009-02-02T04:31:00.000-05:00Aw, poor Clark. He needed that kiss so badly! He...Aw, poor Clark. He needed that kiss so badly! He must be missing her like crazy…having her so near yet so far must be torture.<BR/><BR/>And yay for Chloe/Lois, who KNOWS that Clark is as much a mystery as Superman is. There has to be more to this story, there HAS to!<BR/><BR/>Awesome stuff, Elly!<BR/><BR/>Regards,<BR/>Dee.DeeDeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14277884826087371975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-20304578979405482042009-02-02T03:11:00.000-05:002009-02-02T03:11:00.000-05:00Oh, very nice. Really enjoyed this. I love how she...Oh, very nice. Really enjoyed this. I love how she has two mysteries to solve and how he wants a kiss disguised as chocolate. Yum! :-) -MekaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-75078556924365115962009-02-02T01:46:00.000-05:002009-02-02T01:46:00.000-05:00Yay for you making this into a series! Super exci...Yay for you making this into a series! Super excited!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-56898230060794348052009-02-01T18:36:00.000-05:002009-02-01T18:36:00.000-05:00Elly! Dang it, you can't just leave this story her...Elly! Dang it, you can't just leave this story here! You really have to add to it :p This is a first chapter to a big fic, not a one-shot, trust me.<BR/><BR/>It was very exciting, I loved it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-70787466721453107092009-02-01T15:29:00.000-05:002009-02-01T15:29:00.000-05:00I love the sequence of memories Chloe recalls when...I love the sequence of memories Chloe recalls when he kisses her! You should continue this.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-369745721873804222009-02-01T13:47:00.000-05:002009-02-01T13:47:00.000-05:00I love all of your stories and I have often spent ...I love all of your stories and I have often spent a few hours each day sifting through all of the different stories you have written.<BR/>I dunno if you planned on continuing this or if it was just a fly-by-the-seat-of-your-pants moment, but I would love it if you did!<BR/><BR/>-TAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-20286018328527731742009-02-01T13:22:00.000-05:002009-02-01T13:22:00.000-05:00LOVE! NEED MORE.Work is boring, your stories are m...LOVE! NEED MORE.<BR/><BR/>Work is boring, your stories are more or less what gets me through.<BR/><BR/>Please continue this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-32675542404689211172009-02-01T12:35:00.000-05:002009-02-01T12:35:00.000-05:00I like this a lot!! Hope the sequel is coming soon...I like this a lot!! Hope the sequel is coming soon :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-15800634580966225972009-02-01T11:04:00.000-05:002009-02-01T11:04:00.000-05:00OOOH I love this story. Please write more soon. D...OOOH I love this story. Please write more soon. DeborahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-32428134172002481092009-02-01T10:55:00.000-05:002009-02-01T10:55:00.000-05:00Love this AU and the kiss was epic :DLove this AU and the kiss was epic :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-90032145229318117902009-02-01T10:16:00.000-05:002009-02-01T10:16:00.000-05:00OMG I LOVE YOU ELLY! That was amazing :-)*grinning...OMG I LOVE YOU ELLY! That was amazing :-)*grinning like an idiot*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-6473259331764538082009-02-01T09:57:00.000-05:002009-02-01T09:57:00.000-05:00Superman... and Clark Kent.If she starts from the ...Superman... and Clark Kent.<BR/>If she starts from the second he will find the first!<BR/><BR/>What a great story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com