tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post7288381317727276983..comments2023-11-03T09:34:33.742-04:00Comments on Elly's Fanfiction: Let Me GoUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-68936894138457828622008-03-03T13:28:00.000-05:002008-03-03T13:28:00.000-05:00I noticed that in the episode too. Lana had her we...I noticed that in the episode too. Lana had her wedding bands on. Anyway, great story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-91297439401029120632008-03-02T15:41:00.000-05:002008-03-02T15:41:00.000-05:00OH yeah. I love how you're using that scene. I won...OH yeah. I love how you're using that scene. I wonder how he's going to approach her about it. In the show he seemed very pained to have to watch it. HMM. Is she freaking kidding? Trying to turn it around. I'm glad Clark caught it and was willing to do something about it. Plus, she didn't even realize he was gone. Hell, if she admits it she was glad he was gone. OOH manipulation through sex. She's wicked. The selfish Lana comes out to him and he finally sees. *sigh* She really plays the victim well I must say. HMM. I guess Lana is slapping some sense into Clark letting him see what he refuses to see. I really like the ending. It's a sort of Clana angst but I really like where it led =). <B>Awesome writing Elly!</B>blackheart_mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11131749609048779621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-47655794340442985462008-02-29T17:21:00.000-05:002008-02-29T17:21:00.000-05:00When i saw the clana pairing i almost screamed, li...When i saw the clana pairing i almost screamed, like wtf, i really thought u were sick or something, like with a fever and couldn't think right, also thought it was typo, but here i am, reading the end and loving it, the end was perfect, i really love your fics. <BR/>Allways ready for more of your exellent writing, your Chilean fan, Daniela. <BR/>Take care and keep the awesome work ^^.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-29781856230652118452008-02-28T05:02:00.000-05:002008-02-28T05:02:00.000-05:00I second all of the above commets. Great writing. ...I second all of the above commets. Great writing. Thank you for sharing it with us. Jamie NestorAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-39197330160919320602008-02-28T01:04:00.000-05:002008-02-28T01:04:00.000-05:00I freaked out a bit when I saw the pairing, but th...I freaked out a bit when I saw the pairing, but this is excellent, and SO fair to both the characters. Well done. Loved how dense Clark is when it comes to his feelings about Chloe, and how Lana is intelligent enough to see it, and selfish enough to want him still.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-9707410425333614372008-02-28T00:15:00.000-05:002008-02-28T00:15:00.000-05:00WOW. I don't want to slight your other fantastic C...WOW. I don't want to slight your other fantastic Chlark stories, but this is one of the best things of yours I've ever read. You managed to articulate exactly what's wrong with Clana in a believable, in-character, and not at all fanwankish way. And the Chlarky ending was just perfect! I call SEQUEL!<BR/>~marikologyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-65419678814904537442008-02-27T21:47:00.000-05:002008-02-27T21:47:00.000-05:00Elly, this was unbelievably wonderful!!!! There wa...Elly, this was unbelievably wonderful!!!! There was so much emotion, and pain, and finally an end! This should be tv. God, we've GOT to get you a job writing for Smallville ;D. <BR/><BR/>And I totally didn't notice that Lana had the wedding ring on in tha Lexana sex scene. So she told him that shit AFTER the wedding. *shakeshead*CThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12542318580004946862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-1437042872233393992008-02-27T21:45:00.000-05:002008-02-27T21:45:00.000-05:00"Don't you?"Best line of the story for me. Even be..."Don't you?"<BR/><BR/>Best line of the story for me. Even better than the last line. I actually have to give Lana point for that line, because Clark needs to think about it. It is quite possible that Clark is in love with both Lana and Chloe and just doesn't face up to that fact. <BR/><BR/>Now, I agree with Cheryl. We need a sequel where Clark tells Chloe all about it, at some later time....and then they have hot sex.<BR/><BR/>Yip. :)<BR/><BR/>megAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-49543514307664222262008-02-27T21:41:00.000-05:002008-02-27T21:41:00.000-05:00Did you make up the ring part for your story or wa...Did you make up the ring part for your story or was it in there??Jody W. and Meankittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13733607365443126784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-16310362008866374752008-02-27T21:39:00.000-05:002008-02-27T21:39:00.000-05:00WOW WOW that was awesome! That should be in an ep...WOW WOW that was awesome! That should be in an episode. You're amazinng as always, Elly.<BR/><BR/>DeborahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-10848211565929987512008-02-27T20:54:00.000-05:002008-02-27T20:54:00.000-05:00Perfect! I REALLY want the show to end the Clana ...Perfect! I REALLY want the show to end the Clana this way!!!! You write so true to the characters, excellent job. How about a sequal to this where Clark tells Chloe all about it!Cheriruhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12480713062837481487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-31595308724517718602008-02-27T20:23:00.000-05:002008-02-27T20:23:00.000-05:00Wonderful! So in character and true to the feelin...Wonderful! So in character and true to the feeling of the show. I feel like I just watched a scene on Smallville. Great exit line.BkWurm1https://www.blogger.com/profile/10381874782205137136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-51124306425921576362008-02-27T20:22:00.000-05:002008-02-27T20:22:00.000-05:00really? clana? i love the ending and all but reall...really? clana? i love the ending and all but really? wonderful twist at the end btw. i can't get over the fact it was clana, but i adore the chlark-like ending. PPMS!Adriennehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13566872223420964578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-25800221612397429802008-02-27T19:26:00.000-05:002008-02-27T19:26:00.000-05:00good job elly! at first i was worried when i saw t...good job elly! at first i was worried when i saw the shipping. i thought to myself "hell has just frozen over. CLANA??!!?!" but its ok. I loved it! you always make my day!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com