tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post8027874737020680438..comments2023-11-03T09:34:33.742-04:00Comments on Elly's Fanfiction: ToxinUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-89531411631095779582008-02-19T19:10:00.000-05:002008-02-19T19:10:00.000-05:00WOW. very heated beginning :) ooh reporter CHloe w...WOW. very heated beginning :) ooh reporter CHloe working ^_^ and haha the first word he speaks "need", awesome :D. OOH so while others were affected by "Fear" superman was affected with "need"? LOL. Superman is gonna make Clark look bad :P. <I>"Sex," he said, and swept her up into his arms.</I> Yep. Clark is gonna look sooo bad! But i love how her touch did that, even if it is the toxin speaking :P. OH GOD I LOVE PRIMITIVE CLARK! The only two words he knows. Poor Chloe i hope she convinces him to get out possible public eye. I always love how you go into both POV's in some of your stories. While her point of view is rational, his is intense. And I <B>love it!</B> i love how his mind seems so incoherent. OH snap! i thought the toxin would leave too when he got off once, but he's going again! Clark has become the energizer bunny! But if release isn't going to get it out of his system, then what is? Woah. Superspeed hand job ;]. I wonder how he must feel! Oh he's back! Chloe is a genius! AWw guilty concious Clark. WOW her hand sounded like it hurt :(. AWWW YOUR ENDING WAS AWESOME ELLY!! <B> I LOVED IT!!</B>. He's such a romantic, I love how he wants to make it up to her. I love how he has to convince her to get off work and how cute they are together! It's adorable and just right! ^_^blackheart_mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11131749609048779621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-21149254624374321212008-01-19T19:28:00.000-05:002008-01-19T19:28:00.000-05:00It isn't often that I read a story and actually fe...It isn't often that I read a story and actually feel real fear and think, "Damn, how's she gonna get out of <I>this</I> one?" But that happened with this story. Hot, suspenseful, and lovely!CThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12542318580004946862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-39936396687434089982007-10-04T01:41:00.000-04:002007-10-04T01:41:00.000-04:00I loved seeing Clark reduced to his most primal ur...I loved seeing Clark reduced to his most primal urge and watching how Chloe deals with it. Another great one!MK Piatkowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03121227101455959849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-35741939476234619882007-09-08T01:51:00.000-04:002007-09-08T01:51:00.000-04:00I confess, I didn't find this one very hot, becaus...I confess, I didn't find this one very hot, because Clark's behavior bugged me too much for me to get into it. I did however like the conflict a lot, once Chloe figured it out, especially the threat, and handling it logically. It's always fun to see her outwit him when he poses a threat.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-63446087702656393852007-09-04T21:24:00.000-04:002007-09-04T21:24:00.000-04:00Welcome back sweetie! i hope you had a great vacat...Welcome back sweetie! i hope you had a great vacation.<BR/><BR/>This was amazing oh man!*speechless*Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-72605621737282683392007-09-04T13:54:00.000-04:002007-09-04T13:54:00.000-04:00You're nuts! Superspeed *snigger* I wasn't expec...You're nuts! Superspeed *snigger* I wasn't expecting humor from the way it began, but this was quite clever.Jody W. and Meankittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13733607365443126784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-54773584146565661552007-09-04T10:43:00.000-04:002007-09-04T10:43:00.000-04:00Awww.... Great ending!! :D I really liked the way ...Awww.... Great ending!! :D I really liked the way you had Clark practically losing control, how it looked like he really might hurt her. Thank goodness she figured out a way to get him to process the toxin faster! <BR/><BR/>Good on Clark for trying to make it all up to her. ^_^ *huggles him* <BR/><BR/>SaavikamAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-59436071720308608682007-09-03T12:50:00.000-04:002007-09-03T12:50:00.000-04:00Fantastic new story! Welcome back.Fantastic new story! Welcome back.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-64726105804359227582007-09-03T10:52:00.000-04:002007-09-03T10:52:00.000-04:00Whoo!!! O_O I never thought of the Scarecrow's tox...Whoo!!! O_O I never thought of the Scarecrow's toxin as possibly having that effect. Nicely done! ^_~<BR/><BR/>Saavikam (from LJ)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-91730008080106038062007-09-03T08:05:00.000-04:002007-09-03T08:05:00.000-04:00Welcome back! I just wanted to say thank you for ...Welcome back! I just wanted to say thank you for all your stories; I look forward to reading them. Can't wait for the next update!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-22808965872351668202007-09-03T02:13:00.000-04:002007-09-03T02:13:00.000-04:00You're back! Yay! But Im going off to school...and...You're back! Yay! But Im going off to school...and probably wont have time to come back online for a while...Just wanted to tell you...I LOVE YOUR STORIES! They rock! and keep me totally into Smallville...THANK!Nathalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06566063479240655660noreply@blogger.com