tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post835057198270810691..comments2023-11-03T09:34:33.742-04:00Comments on Elly's Fanfiction: Promise Me, Chapter 3Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-31146641715809504702007-10-31T23:40:00.000-04:002007-10-31T23:40:00.000-04:00YES! Clark has finally figured out wat we've known...YES! Clark has finally figured out wat we've known all along. His love lies with Chloe. I love how in these 3 parts u switch from Chloe to Lana and now to Clark all expressing their opinions and views to the same scene with a little extra added to them. In every part I've loved this line: <B>Guilt and embarrassment combined to make him very grumpy. "I just almost turned you into a chicken nugget," he snarled. "Extra crispy. That's all."</B> The sarcasm in it just cracks me up. Too bad he was too preocupied(sp) to hear Lana. DARN!blackheart_mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11131749609048779621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-50237489998608551442007-10-04T01:02:00.000-04:002007-10-04T01:02:00.000-04:00Just want to say this before I move on in the stor...Just want to say this before I move on in the story. I love the way that each time you switch POV, we get a little deeper into the story. Usually with different POV, we end in the same place but here we take a couple more steps and it adds so much to the internal dialogue we get to hear by the different POV.<BR/><BR/>And yes, I LOVE how Lana is getting hers!MK Piatkowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03121227101455959849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-65115819398821511852007-09-24T16:52:00.000-04:002007-09-24T16:52:00.000-04:00It's great to see this scene from each person's pe...It's great to see this scene from each person's perspective. I love this story, Elly. I wish it had been this way in the episode.CThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12542318580004946862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-34611625861173942942007-07-23T15:47:00.000-04:002007-07-23T15:47:00.000-04:00Nice...and Chloe calling him a doofus made my day!...Nice...and Chloe calling him a doofus made my day!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09131842203471167835noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-86588671905583091642007-07-21T11:38:00.000-04:002007-07-21T11:38:00.000-04:00I thought you had a better handle on your heat vis...I thought you had a better handle on your heat vision, Clark. <BR/>I love the different points of view. I liked that he heard Lana gasp in her corner. It put a big smile on my face. Sucks to be her.<BR/>Thanks as always. <BR/>Chlarkstheword - KsiteAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-44270725466634383502007-07-19T11:40:00.000-04:002007-07-19T11:40:00.000-04:00Great part EllyGreat part EllyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-72167570934824521682007-07-18T15:42:00.000-04:002007-07-18T15:42:00.000-04:00I agree -- the different VPs is really cool!I agree -- the different VPs is really cool!Jody W. and Meankittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13733607365443126784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-73561913731115607752007-07-17T16:31:00.000-04:002007-07-17T16:31:00.000-04:00HA! Yes I love it :D! I'm loving how you are doing...HA! Yes I love it :D! I'm loving how you are doing it Promise-esque with the different POV's. Its great :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-50663289623388525282007-07-17T13:33:00.000-04:002007-07-17T13:33:00.000-04:00Whoo hoo! More POV goodness. I tell you, an arouse...Whoo hoo! More POV goodness. I tell you, an aroused & awkward Clark is an adorable Clark. I hope he (they) bust Lana! Please let him hear her....no way in hell he should have missed her presence in the SV version. Another great update Elly, thanks so much for sharing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-78822898959481169252007-07-17T00:24:00.000-04:002007-07-17T00:24:00.000-04:00Very nice. A bit more complicated than the "sex u...Very nice. A bit more complicated than the "sex up against the wall with Lana watching" you promised.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com