tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post8625440411462016685..comments2023-11-03T09:34:33.742-04:00Comments on Elly's Fanfiction: Why Don't You and I, Chapter 4Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-41773245660963000462008-02-07T14:43:00.000-05:002008-02-07T14:43:00.000-05:00LMAO!!!!!!! Good, GAAWWDDDD!!! “And we’ve already ...LMAO!!!!!!! Good, GAAWWDDDD!!! <BR/><BR/>“And we’ve already spent half of it talking?”<BR/><BR/>Clark had never seen Chloe really, undeniably, murderously livid. He was suddenly more afraid of her than an entire phantom zone of wraiths. They, at least, would have looked less likely to eat him alive.<BR/><BR/>“I just…” he began feebly.<BR/><BR/>“Shut up and take it, Clark,”-----LOL!!!!<BR/><BR/>Go head Chlo'!! That's right, "Shut up and take it"!!!! LOL!!! I likes, I likes! This story really is too awesome for words! I love to see this get turned into a real movie! Love the creativity, you guys! Okay.... moving along to the next chapter....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-73693137123625556122007-11-14T07:15:00.000-05:002007-11-14T07:15:00.000-05:00I so loved it maybe they would make a baby..But Ch...I so loved it maybe they would make a baby..But Chole would freak because she wouldn't remeber but Clark I guess would be over the moon..Loved itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-33635279119335493262007-11-13T21:47:00.000-05:002007-11-13T21:47:00.000-05:00Great update! Too bad they only have an hour to be...Great update! Too bad they only have an hour to be together. I hope that hour lasts a lifetime!!<BR/><BR/>Rachel BAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-41060813105989057352007-11-13T20:00:00.000-05:002007-11-13T20:00:00.000-05:00AWW man I kinda wanted it to hurt him...lol.LMao. ...AWW man I kinda wanted it to hurt him...lol.LMao. love how she brings up her letter in 'Fever' and then tries to shrug it off...for once Clark isn't that dumb :P It breaks my heart that he's letting her go again. Respect on him trying to keep her safe but damit he's hurting both of them so much! I gotta say I think Chloe should feel like this not him (if u switch Lana under Jimmy): <B>"Even though it was exactly what he wanted to hear, Clark wasn't sure he believed her. For someone who hadn't been in love, she sure had gone to a lot of trouble towards the end to keep assuring Jimmy that she was his"</B> I love his realization. That's right Kent u hurt her pretty damn bad! But his last words about him making himself worthy of her love is so cute I just can't stay bitter with him :P Aww the realization that they only have half an hour together is heart breaking but I love that she just flings at him without a care...well except time. This line made me grin like a fool: <B>"Clark had never seen Chloe really, undeniably, murderously livid. He was suddenly more afraid of her than an entire phantom zone of wraiths. They, at least, would have looked less likely to eat him alive."</B> It makes me so sad that no matter what happens here in the end when the time is over she may end up feeling complete spite toward him while he remembers how much she let him love her...I'm loving it thou and I still can't wait for the next update :Dblackheart_mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11131749609048779621noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25257311.post-46983608087734624082007-11-13T18:09:00.000-05:002007-11-13T18:09:00.000-05:00Thank you for continuing this story at such fast p...Thank you for continuing this story at such fast pace.:-) This last two chapters made me so sad.:'( I hoped Chloe would slap some sense into Clark at the end of the third chapter, but it seems he didn't change his mind at all. More so Chloe seems to be resigned to the situation. I can only hope, that they will find a way to be together. I mean, who else should figure this out, when not a superpowered alien and an incredibly smart reporter?;-) Anyway, I will shut up now and enjoy the ride (hoping for a happy ending, naturaly;-)). I am definitely hooked and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!:-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com